Chapter 1_page 24

posted September 27th, 2010, 3:33 pm


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September 27th, 2010, 5:39 pm

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I think your comic is awesome! Lovely art, good storytelling, BUT...

Maybe you should spend a little more time on the typography and grammar. Such as Becouse - Because etc. And look at where you break the larger words in pieces.
If you put Disloyalty differently in the textballoon (for example, break it after 'Dis-' enter '-loyalty') it might look cleaner.

Sorry for the long post. Just wanted to point it out BECAUSE it's such a good comic! <3

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